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[khiemtran]

I'm learning a bit more about the new, more immediate voice I'm using. Part of the trick seems to be in working out how long to go between intervals. I'm trying to put in chunks of description or reflection between each fast flowing section in order to break things up a bit. I'm not sure if I found the right balance yet. It's a bit hard to judge as I only get to write small chunks at a time. I'm hoping to find a sustainable rhythm between the slow and fast bits, that won't be too boring or too rushed.